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Job Title:

Facilities BMS Controls/Electrical TechnicianDepartment

Engineering

Location

Rocky Mount, NC

Shift

1st Shift

Pay Range

$29 - $35/hour (plus benefits)

About the Role

Join our dynamic engineering department in Rocky Mount, NC as a Facilities BMS Controls/Electrical Technician! In this role, you will be a key player in maintaining and optimizing our building management systems and electrical infrastructure. You'll be responsible for updating BMS controls, diligently monitoring HVAC assets, and providing expert troubleshooting, repair, and installation services for electrical distribution systems. This is a fantastic opportunity to contribute to a vital operation and grow your skills within a supportive and rewarding environment.

Responsibilities

Update and maintain Building Management System (BMS) controls for optimal performance. Proactively monitor HVAC assets, identifying and addressing potential issues before they escalate. Troubleshoot, diagnose, and repair a wide range of HVAC components. Install, maintain, and repair electrical distribution systems, ensuring safety and reliability. Respond to and resolve facility-related maintenance requests promptly and effectively. Collaborate with other team members to ensure efficient facility operations. Adhere to all safety regulations and company policies.

Qualifications

Minimum 5 years of hands-on experience with Building Management Systems (BMS) controls. Strong understanding of HVAC component repair, maintenance, and troubleshooting principles. Proven experience with Niagara Software or similar BMS platforms. Solid knowledge of electrical distribution systems and safety protocols. Excellent problem-solving and analytical skills. Ability to work independently and as part of a team. Strong communication and interpersonal skills.

Benefits

Competitive hourly rate ($29 - $35/hour) Comprehensive benefits package

Pension Plan! Opportunity for professional growth and developmentTo Apply

Interested candidates are encouraged to apply! Please send your resume and cover letter to [email protected].

Learn More

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